Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Summary.

In the Japanese occupation, some people were placed in prison to be tortured. No one were allow to put on airs or graces in prison. Many different races with many different customs and religions, but there were no social distinctions; we showered together daily. The four hundred of us would gather under a long water pipe punched full of holes and with a piece of soap in our hands, we would wait for the water to be turned on. The water would flow out for a short while then it will be turned off. Once it started again, everyone would be madly busy, scrubbing their emaciated bodies with pieces of rags cut out fron gunnysacks.

2 comments:

  1. Have you actually read the Summary question? This is not how you should begin your summary. Please refer to the English Book for details. Also, I only see 2-3 points (you should have drawn at least 9 relevant points from the paragraphs you were supposed to summarise). Too many words were copied from the original text.

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